Short Story: Waiting In Vain

Written on 8/13/2006 – 7:20 pm | by keysinunez.com | 1,789 Views

In the bright lights of the restaurant, he eyed couples with contempt as they smiled, held hands, flirted, or just had dinner. He was getting tired of watching these people. He had been sitting in the L’Enoteca Fuori Porta for a little over an hour, waiting for the blind date that his friend setup for him.

He had already absorbed the posh bedecking in the Italian restaurant where they were to meet. It was located near the upper class wharf, just five minutes away from the Palm Villas. There was a light, blowing breeze as he looked around the place. He could taste the salt in the air as he eyed the little round tables covered with simple white table cloths, napkin, plate, glass and silverware neatly arranged on top. The tables were set as if only couples favored the place. In fact, as he looked around, he only saw couples seated close to each other whispering as if the wind carried their conversations about. He stared at the floor, richly decorated with paintings of Dryads, and Naiads, some frolicking about, some bathing in the stream, while others were just looking up to the sky. “The owner must be a fanatic of nymphs,” he muttered to himself, and shoved the thought away.

It was nearing dusk. He looked straight at the entrance of the restaurant and saw the sun setting in the horizon. He instantly forgot that he was losing his patience and looking stupid in his soliloquy. The sky had a reddish glow in it, with the sun just a few inches from the ocean as it seemed. He was clearly dazzled by the beauty of it when a curvaceous figure suddenly marred his view.

The tall slender figure slowly made his way to him. He could not see her face because of the bright sunlight still behind her. She wore a billowy dress as she strutted with an allure that would have made fresh dough grow hard. As the sun set completely, the lights on the venue illuminated her face. She looked at him directly, eyelashes curled to its fullest, lips slightly puckered, besmirched red.

As she continued to walk towards him, all sound was muted, except for that clicking sound emanating from her heels. All movement was instantly blurred, except that of hers, slowly approaching him.

Was she the girl that Marvin setup with him? He hated blind dates. Not even a picture or a description was given to him. He was just told to wait somewhere and that the girl would know him right away.

So there she was, a tall, slender, curvaceous, woman, ultimately a bombshell that guys would normally clamor for, walking straight towards him!

His heart beat faster and faster with each click that her shoes made. He felt his throat tighten. Beads of sweat formed on his forehead. His hands started shaking. His foot uncontrollably tapped the pavement. He could feel himself getting jittery with each second.

When she was only a few feet shy of him, she smiled and waved her hand. He was about to wave back when a deep voice behind him said, “Honey, I ordered the chicken!”


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  1. 18 Responses to “Short Story: Waiting In Vain”

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  3. By Pinoy Underground on Aug 13, 2006 | Reply

    ayos sa promotion tactic ah, author name mo sa pinoy underground eh keysidotcom hehehe

    cool!

    salamat uli sa contribution, wag kang magsasawa

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  5. By antoinia on Aug 13, 2006 | Reply

    i like the fresh dough part. hahahahah. sexy-hilarious. :P

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  7. By keysi on Aug 13, 2006 | Reply

    Pinoy Underground dude, i have one long story coming. publish ko rin sa P.U. pag tapos na antoinia kaw talaga! :D

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  9. By hambolsos on Aug 14, 2006 | Reply

    Love defies the traditional law of physics, wherein, an object of specific mass and weight supposively occupies a singe space not both at the same time. The alluring question is, "who is this girl your dating??" Nyahaha. But then, literary forms can really be deceiving. It's for me to find out. Nice one keysi boy. Two thumbs up!!

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  11. By keysi on Aug 14, 2006 | Reply

    hambolsos: thanks for dropping by man. in fairness, you really thought about what you wrote man. :lol: jokish~

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  13. By >ced on Aug 14, 2006 | Reply

    putcha, pa-promote din... http://methinksreally.blogspot.com. hahaha. anong balita sa inyo sa #up?

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  15. By keysi on Aug 14, 2006 | Reply

    ced 2 months na ata ako hindi pumapasok sa undernet. :P

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  17. By Patty on Aug 14, 2006 | Reply

    I love the way you made the story oh so detailed. xD Thanks for somehow finding your way into my blog, and for the tag, muchos gracias ^___^

    And oh, I thought you were a female. LOL

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  19. By keysi on Aug 14, 2006 | Reply

    Patty: :P i'm male and a hot-blooded one at that. LOL. thanks for dropping by as well. :)

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  21. By Patty on Aug 14, 2006 | Reply

    It's aryt. Most of my guy friends call me Pat/Pats and not Patty. Hahaha :D

    I'll add you to my links, ok? :]

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  23. By keysi on Aug 14, 2006 | Reply

    Patty: sure thing. i already added you :)

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  25. By Nanseh~ on Aug 15, 2006 | Reply

    Keyseh~ !!! Mishu na! So i thought. She was too good to be true for a blind date! Haha. Wala ka na namang magawa. Buti pa ko, so happy to be outta the love game! Eeuw. HAHAHA!

    See you soon, dear. Ciao!

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  27. By Nanseh~ on Aug 15, 2006 | Reply

    BTW, if u can swing by (U got internet access at home anyway :P), http://stolichnancy.blogs.friendster.com/nancy_drools/ So you'd know whatever happened to me since I got back here in Manila.. Hi hi. Kisses.

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  29. By keysi on Aug 15, 2006 | Reply

    Nanseh~: WTF? outta the love game? gads. I've no access at home na, but i'll visit your bloggy soon~ send me an SMS, i'll call you ASAP. :)

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  31. By aqsitin on Aug 19, 2006 | Reply

    HIJO DE! hihihihihi

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  33. By keysi on Aug 20, 2006 | Reply

    tintin bebeh~

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